Wow that sounds somewhat confusing to me lol. Yea, you should probably keep the render clean and make it stand out instead of being in the background too much. But keep it blended good. The lines are a little too thick for me but that could be a personal thing, idk. Text could use something to make it less boring. But for a first, its pretty damn good I think. Look up some tutorials and play with different filters and the blending options.